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2005-05-10 10:53 PM

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OK - anyone who has looked up my profile knows I am into poetry and occassionally I write it too - or at least try to.

This one took two runs totaling 30K to write. Hope you like it.

Hunters

I am the orange spot before you
It doesn’t matter where I came from
I am in front of you.
Your pace quickens
Grey asphalt in lean strides
Flows hard and relentless underfoot
You reel me in.
It takes you longer than you thought
And just as you hear the sound of my feet
I hear the rapid strike of yours.
My pace quickens – I am in front of you.
You push harder
Pull even and smile
A quick nod “Great weather today.”
You are casual as you pass me
But I know it was not that easy.
I was your motivation
And as you recede before me
You become mine.


2005-05-11 7:52 AM
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awesome, thanks for sharing it.

my poems on my runs look more like this:
"I hate this.
This sucks.
It hurts.
Look- a gas station- I wonder of they sell candy?
How can it only be 10 minutes."


I think you are a better poet and clearly a better runner!
2005-05-11 8:16 AM
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possum - 2005-05-11 6:52 AMawesome, thanks for sharing it.my poems on my runs look more like this:"I hate this.This sucks.It hurts.Look- a gas station- I wonder of they sell candy?How can it only be 10 minutes."


While maybe not the work of art that Wookie's poem is, yours just about made me spit out my Diet Pepsi I was laughing so hard!!
2005-05-11 11:08 AM
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possum - 2005-05-11 7:52 AM

awesome, thanks for sharing it.

my poems on my runs look more like this:
"I hate this.
This sucks.
It hurts.
Look- a gas station- I wonder of they sell candy?
How can it only be 10 minutes."


I think you are a better poet and clearly a better runner![/QUOTE

ROTFLMAO - I remember that feeling well. Kind of sums it up when you are just starting out. Well put.

2005-05-11 11:21 AM
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How 'bout a haiku:

I swim like a rock

Like the proverbial stone

No buoyancy here

2005-05-11 2:25 PM
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VERY ENTERTAINING.. I love it!


2005-05-12 1:26 AM
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Excellent Poem Wookiee. As for yours possum, I had to clean my screen off after spitting out my water. Now that's funny.
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