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2012-09-06 10:14 AM

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Subject: Hurricane brings the beat, but we ain't dancing.

 

 

Hurricane brings the beat, but we ain't dancing.

 

A storm down south pushes funky
air through every crack and wrinkle.

 
We cannot get naked enough
To vent the heat or cool our skin.
 
The clouds are clothing us. We wear
rain for a hat. The wooly-wet
 
a river-muddied Saint Bernard
who wants to be your best friend.       
 
 


2012-09-06 11:14 AM
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Subject: RE: Hurricane brings the beat, but we ain't dancing.

I wonder if Yanti is excited about the 2nd stanza??

I like the third stanza!

Good schtuff, Wile-E!

2012-09-06 11:46 AM
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Subject: RE: Hurricane brings the beat, but we ain't dancing.
Is that naked or "nekkid?"    There is a difference.     Cool   Subtle nuances are critical...
2012-09-06 3:36 PM
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Subject: RE: Hurricane brings the beat, but we ain't dancing.
RLUSI is already poet laureate of BT. I nominate him for poet laureate of the Weather Channel.  I really like the wet St Bernard metaphor for the soggy earth.  TW
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