Ok- here's the original poem I wrote. The revised/updated version is in red.
Cute guy at the pool last night,
Weird guy at the pool night,
You gave me such a nice sight!
You sure did give me a fright!
You have such nice psyique,
You like to rip farts when we run,
And you get an A+ for your swim technique.
Honestly, I don't think that's fun.
And you don't care that
I don't care that you gave me a box of my fav Cliff Bars,
Even though your breast stroke was faster than my free,
Or if you tell me that my sweat is sexy,
I'm sure we'd get along great- because after all, how could you not like me?
I know we don't get along- because after all, you're not the one for me.
I like to swim bike and run,
I like to workout at the gym,
And I've been told I'm alot of fun!
I gave you a chance and went out on a wim!
It's too bad you'll be out of town for 4 weeks,
It's too bad that you're still in town,
Don't worry- you're my favorite tri geek!
Because seeing you makes me frown.
Until you get back I'll just hang tight,
Until you leave I'll just hang tight,
And maybe in month you'll be in my sight!
And maybe in a month you'll be out of my sight!
Edited by runnergirl29 2005-12-09 8:04 AM