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Subject: A Walk Through the City with an Invisible Bear on a Chain.

Listening for rain, like a kid on Christmas

waiting for the hooves of reindeer

on the roof. Please Santa, bring me

some lightning wrapped in a bow.

 

Thunder, the sound of a storm getting its license

to drive wet and loud, out of sight of the clouds

who now question the decision to give him the keys.

His friend the wind will lead him to trouble.

 

By mid-August, the sun seems a little older,

yellowing like the edges of an old photograph.

A scattered few leaves change colors --

in the mirror, the greying of my own hair.

 

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2012-08-16 3:26 PM
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Subject: RE: A Walk Through the City with an Invisible Bear on a Chain.

Just wow.  This is a great one.

Those are some great metaphors to convey the emotional feelings about thunderstorms in August.

TW



Edited by tech_geezer 2012-08-16 3:27 PM
2012-08-16 3:30 PM
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Subject: RE: A Walk Through the City with an Invisible Bear on a Chain.

*cheering*

Lightning in a bow. I love it.

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