Subject: RE: TOTW: A need for creed.atl_runner - 2008-09-17 12:14 PM I like this.. maybe a not so cliche version of it. Journey / destination is too common, but I like the statement it's making.
"I will do my best and regardless of the final outcome, I know it's more about the journey than the destination."
Creed so far.
One with the water, one with the land. I train with determination, on a quest to understand. Understand my limits, build on my strengths, someone finish this next sentence.. avoid common cliches.. try to transition it to race, include ethics / honor.. we'll end the creed with I swim, Bike, Run, and I am, A Triathlete. or something like that.
Reminds me of the Life Time Fitness triathlon ads that say "I am a doctor... I am a triathlete", "I am a teacher... I am a triathlete." I actually always wonder about the ones that ended up on the cutting room floor... "I am a narcissist... I am a triathlete..." or "I am a felon... I am a triathlete."  I'll play... I think the whole "one with" sounds very cliche, too, but then again, I think a lot of these sorts of things do. It's the nature of them, to some extent. The rhyme (land/understand) makes it too cutesy for my personal taste. Here goes: I train in water and on land. I train with purpose, on a quest for understanding. Understanding of myself, my strengths and my limits. I race with determination and self-awareness, overcoming obstacles, both physical and mental, to cross the finish line with strength and integrity. I swim, I bike, I run. I am a triathlete. |